Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

No Kinda Form

The endless rainy days and nights
Leaving cold dampness in the air
Only grey clouds within my sight
Any form of happiness feels so rare

My thoughts and dreams a prison
No relief within my life so it seems
While I wish for any hopeful visions
As i stifle heart wrenching screams

A life where dreams are nightmares
Are now becoming my daily norm
Stopped looking for those who care
Happily ever after has no kinda form

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 26, 2019 at 7:15 AM WoW! This is bleak cool. Like Denzel played Bleak in "Mo' Better Blues," I crown you "Ms. Bleak." lol! Your indigo ink paint the blues so well. Sparkling ocean of dreams has a vast kind of form. But, it's up in the sky. I LOVE your poetry, Brenda. Love and joy forever. Brenda Chiri October 26, 2019 at 7:54 AM I know I spelt enrico wrong my bad!:) Brenda Chiri October 26, 2019 at 7:53 AM Haha thank you Freddie! I am so thrilled you enjoy my poetry!;) and being crowned Ms Bleak .... lol well at one point in life I could have and would have taken that title and wore it with pride! Hahaha! I don't do bleak much any more I have been trying to stick to a more up beat type but even writing about love gets boring( wow never thought I'd say that) but thank you so much Enrico!;)

John Fleming October 25, 2019 at 7:33 AM Well I suppose this is what life is all about in so many differing respects: troughs and peaks. Cannot have the highs without the lows -- hurrah for the highs! :) john P.s keep up the sterling work, Poetess. Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 1:49 PM See so true one must take the good with the bad! lol thanks babe!;)

Robert Lindley October 25, 2019 at 6:00 AM This poem has the depth, power and anguish of a soul that has and possibly is facing darkness, dread, sorrows of life's many hard blows my friend. Definitely a very powerful piece and a job well done to convey such so masterfully! A fav- and a true and glowing gem too. Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 1:48 PM Robert thank you so very! Appreciate your stopping by! ;)

CayCay Godwin October 25, 2019 at 5:49 AM Powerfully depressing imagery - this poem delivers all that you intended and does it beautifully. Great job. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 1:46 PM Thank you CayCay! Means a lot to hear you say that!;)

Gershon Wolf October 24, 2019 at 5:10 PM Wonderfully penned, Brenda! Such anguish and angst, so poignantly portrayed. Bravo! ~ Raskolnikov in his darkroom Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 1:13 AM Thank you Gershon! I do need to get over to read you because I miss my daily smile!;)

Arturo Michael October 24, 2019 at 11:14 AM I love the way you expressed yourself here... Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 3:44 PM Arturo how sweet of you! Thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams October 24, 2019 at 10:13 AM i never believed in fairy tales or happily ever after, i believe in making the most of every day, crawling out beneath those nightmares and pushing on...deep but i like it... :) Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 1:12 AM Haha! Well said my friend! I believe to achieve anything in life one must dream but as you said not everything is achievable! ;) Sandra Adams October 24, 2019 at 4:29 PM It is my belief that dreams are the foundation of living to stop dreaming is to stop living but most dreams don’t ever come true so they are simply just dreams to keep us living Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 3:43 PM Ahh Sandy you don't believe! What about dreams? Lol see I was once told to never give up on dreams so I tried to take that into account but I think he lied! Haha! Thank you sandy!;)