No It Wasn'T

No it wasn't my son who was shot and killed 

No it wasn't my husband who was sent to jail 

No it wasn't my brother, brother from blood 

But that was somebody's world at some point. 
No it wasn't my wife who was murderd with lies

No it wasn't my daughter who's death was covered 

No it wasn't my sister, sister from blood 

But that could've been somebody's mom
I can't go on and pretend that there ain't war in the streets 

That there's something terribly wrong with the way some people think 

There's so many words unspoken 

So many lives just taken 

Still so much injustice 

And hearts still broken 
My mama used to tell me that life was too short 

That whenever something hurt me 

To move on and just let go 
But this time it isn't only about me 

My heart is not the only one that hurts 

People out there think they don't have a choice 

They forget they have a voice
Mothers are losing their daughters

Husbands are losing their wives 

Children are losing their parents 

We can't continue to go round acting like everything is just fine
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:23:00 AM
Strong write. It's been a pleasure reading your poetry today, Karolina. Many are listed as "I don't know" under form. When in doubt they can usually be listed as "Free Verse." Check out the Forms tab at the top. You write with passion and I believe have a lot of potential, but my opinion is just that, and your desire to write is all that is important.
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Karolina Grimaldi
Date: 2/12/2017 2:54:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much for your words and your advice. I am in fact very new in sharing my poetry and expanding it and learning more is exactly what I need. I'm still very new with poetry soup but I'm very interested in sorts of contests.
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:24:00 AM
(sorry limited characters per comment)... If you are interested, the Contests hosted here can be very helpful in expanding your poetic knowledge as well as inspiration for poems and can also offer a lot of exposure for your writes. Waiting to read more.
Date: 2/10/2017 12:27:00 PM
A well written poem, a shared expression. A 7 my friend!
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Karolina Grimaldi
Date: 2/12/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Maureen
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