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No Grievances Permitted

Spooling southward on shattered wing- I ache to fold from life’s cruel sting! (I’d rather die, than say goodbye) Because I can’t repent this suffering (A reinvention of 'No Assembly Required')

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/31/2016 9:14:00 PM
Joshua, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:30:00 PM
wow, I agree with sandy's assessment: so few words, such big impact. Congrats to you
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Date: 11/12/2013 8:04:00 PM
so few words...such a big impact...nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:01:00 AM
A truly magnificent re-invention. Well done and congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations, well done.
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:21:00 AM
congrats and a lovely write.
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Book: Shattered Sighs