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No Expectations

I felt the rain on my face, said I'd felt it first but you said you had as we walked hand in hand into the copper tone sun set-- you punch drunk and me just a little tipsy. "It was a wonderful party," we both said together then laughed because neither one of us had wanted to attend it. We agreed that life was like that-- when you least expect to you have a fantastic time and so it was we didn't argue over who'd felt the rain first just enjoyed it with uplifted spirits and faces.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 4:09:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today have a good one.
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Date: 5/24/2011 11:54:00 AM
A very good write. Free verse, but quite poetic. I give it top marks!
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Christina Cowling
Date: 5/24/2011 3:26:00 PM
Hi Robert, Thank you for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 5/24/2011 10:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. As it was a very interesting write. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Christina. Love, Carol
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Christina Cowling
Date: 5/24/2011 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Carol, I'm just finding my way around here and will be reading poetry of those who have commented on mine. Hope to get to know all your work and you better.

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