Carole Duet Poet Rhyme

No Ceiling

You hold my heart lightly
Within your hands so strong,
Never crushing or squeezing tightly
I’m free and yet belong.

Your words deep, yet speak
Of truth and sweet mystery.
Listening to you I peek
Into the world of history.

Loving what you are revealing
My love has no ceiling.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  Dec. 29, 2017
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Kai Michael Neumann February 10, 2018 at 2:17 AM 'My love has no ceiling'. Great. Romantic. And the sky is not the limit... Carole Duet February 10, 2018 at 5:45 PM Thank you, Kai. So glad you liked it. Carole :D

Maria Williams January 11, 2018 at 1:59 AM Ahh yes I see Congratulations are in order here Carole on a beautiful poem. Awesome my dear friend....Maria xxx Carole Duet January 11, 2018 at 3:29 PM Thanks, Maria. I couldn't believe it was a winner but it sure did lift my spirits. Carole :D

James Inman January 10, 2018 at 7:04 AM A lovely write Carole. Carole Duet January 10, 2018 at 6:40 PM Thank you so much, James. Carole Duet

Line Gauthier January 3, 2018 at 3:47 PM Congrats on your win, Carole. Carole Duet January 4, 2018 at 2:30 AM Thank you so much, Line. Carole Duet

Janice Canerdy December 31, 2017 at 9:50 PM Lovely, Carole. Made me smile. Congrats and happy New Year! Janice Carole Duet December 31, 2017 at 9:54 PM I'm so glad the poem made you smile, Janice. Your comment has made me smile. :) Carole Duet

Susan Ashley December 31, 2017 at 8:51 PM Carole, your sweet sentiments are beautifully and rhythmically expressed - your love is limitless.. so lovely.. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Happy New Year! ~Susan Carole Duet December 31, 2017 at 9:00 PM Thank you so much, Susan, and Happy New Year to you too! :D Carole Duet

Kim Rodrigues December 31, 2017 at 8:35 PM A lovely weaving of words! Congrats, Carole! Carole Duet December 31, 2017 at 9:02 PM Thank you, Kim. Congrats to you too! Carole Duet

Beautiful Scars December 31, 2017 at 8:23 PM oh sweet Carol, such beautiful rhythm and rhyming. Loved your poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo Carole Duet December 31, 2017 at 9:05 PM Thank you so much, Luloo. I really appreciate that. And, Happy New Year to you. :D Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2017 at 5:22 PM I like the sonnet feel to this one with its ending couplet. Very nicely done. Carole Duet December 30, 2017 at 7:57 PM Thanks, Andrea. At first I thought it was a sonnet until I realized there weren't enough lines. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Carole

Silent One December 30, 2017 at 10:34 AM No limit to your love... beautiful.sentiments.. Carole Duet December 30, 2017 at 7:55 PM Thanks, S1. You got it. :D Carole

CayCay Godwin December 30, 2017 at 9:45 AM This is wonderful! Beauty delivered in so few words. I did Christmas so I don't think it will go over big compared to love writes, but I don't mind (had to go where my muse insisted, dontcha know?). All the best to you now and in the upcoming year. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Carole Duet December 30, 2017 at 7:53 PM Yes, CayCay, we have to obey our muses. Thank you so much for your nice comment. Carole :D

Vijay Pandit December 30, 2017 at 7:46 AM Beautiful lines with impact like..I'm fee yet belong..lovely ending..best for a win. Carole Duet December 30, 2017 at 7:51 PM Thank you, Vijay. :) Carole

Joanna Daniel December 30, 2017 at 4:56 AM Wonderful and sweet, Carole:) Carole Duet December 30, 2017 at 5:16 AM So glad you liked it, Jo, and thanks for the visit. Carole Duet

Charlie Smith December 29, 2017 at 10:10 PM Loved your rhyming pace with the 5Word format, well done Carole, best wishes... Carole Duet December 30, 2017 at 5:17 AM Thank you so much, Charlie. Carole Duet