No Ceiling

You hold my heart lightly
Within your hands so strong,
Never crushing or squeezing tightly
I’m free and yet belong.

Your words deep, yet speak
Of truth and sweet mystery.
Listening to you I peek
Into the world of history.

Loving what you are revealing
My love has no ceiling.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  Dec. 29, 2017
"All Rights Reserved"

freedomhistorylovemysteryrhyme

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/10/2018 2:17:00 AM

'My love has no ceiling'. Great. Romantic. And the sky is not the limit...

Carole Duet
Date: 2/10/2018 5:45:00 PM

Thank you, Kai. So glad you liked it. Carole :D

Maria Williams

Date: 1/11/2018 1:59:00 AM

Ahh yes I see Congratulations are in order here Carole on a beautiful poem. Awesome my dear friend....Maria xxx

Carole Duet
Date: 1/11/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thanks, Maria. I couldn't believe it was a winner but it sure did lift my spirits. Carole :D

James Inman

Date: 1/10/2018 7:04:00 AM

A lovely write Carole.

Carole Duet
Date: 1/10/2018 6:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, James. Carole Duet

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/3/2018 3:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Carole.

Carole Duet
Date: 1/4/2018 2:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line. Carole Duet

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/31/2017 9:50:00 PM

Lovely, Carole. Made me smile. Congrats and happy New Year! Janice

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 9:54:00 PM

I'm so glad the poem made you smile, Janice. Your comment has made me smile. :) Carole Duet

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2017 8:51:00 PM

Carole, your sweet sentiments are beautifully and rhythmically expressed - your love is limitless.. so lovely.. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Happy New Year! ~Susan

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, and Happy New Year to you too! :D Carole Duet

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2017 8:35:00 PM

A lovely weaving of words! Congrats, Carole!

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Congrats to you too! Carole Duet

Beautiful Scars

Date: 12/31/2017 8:23:00 PM

oh sweet Carol, such beautiful rhythm and rhyming. Loved your poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 9:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Luloo. I really appreciate that. And, Happy New Year to you. :D Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2017 5:22:00 PM

I like the sonnet feel to this one with its ending couplet. Very nicely done.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/30/2017 7:57:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. At first I thought it was a sonnet until I realized there weren't enough lines. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Carole

Silent One

Date: 12/30/2017 10:34:00 AM

No limit to your love... beautiful.sentiments..

Carole Duet
Date: 12/30/2017 7:55:00 PM

Thanks, S1. You got it. :D Carole

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/30/2017 9:45:00 AM

This is wonderful! Beauty delivered in so few words. I did Christmas so I don't think it will go over big compared to love writes, but I don't mind (had to go where my muse insisted, dontcha know?). All the best to you now and in the upcoming year. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Carole Duet
Date: 12/30/2017 7:53:00 PM

Yes, CayCay, we have to obey our muses. Thank you so much for your nice comment. Carole :D