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No Birds Sing

Dawn nears, no birds sing Corruption fills the air. Just beyond our trench they lie, Corpses here, and there. Corpses that were comrades Once alive and full of vigour, Now there they are, in the mud Dead, and stiff with rigor. Just a day or so ago They were telling nervous jokes, Checking out each others kit, Grabbing crafty smokes. But now they lie, mouths agape White as porcelain, Heroes they, every one. We'll not see their likes again. Entry for PREMIERE CONTEST NO 110 any theme, Any form,max of 25 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 7/11/2017.Placed 2nd.

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Date: 11/12/2017 7:34:00 PM
wow, and I see this one got a win. It's SO deserving of it, Gary. You really described it well. How they are there so full of life and then just like that, gone forever , thanks to war.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/13/2017 1:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 11/11/2017 9:14:00 PM
Blessings and congratulations on your win, Gary - nicely done! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/12/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thank you Gregory :)
Date: 11/11/2017 10:08:00 AM
So appropriate and well done. You've captured the waste but also the heroism. Congrats! Kathy
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Kathleen :)
Date: 11/10/2017 10:38:00 PM
Very well crafted poem. Beautiful.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2017 2:25:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations! Sad casualty of war.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/10/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 11/9/2017 5:02:00 PM
such a moving poem Gary, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/9/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 11/9/2017 4:42:00 PM
Moving and reverent tribute to soldiers, Gary, and at a very fitting time. CONGRATS! Janice
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/9/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 11/7/2017 5:57:00 PM
Forgot to log in and had to get back to this poem, very powerful indeed
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/7/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Lilly :)
Date: 11/7/2017 4:47:00 PM
A very powerful and reaching poem Gary. Well done!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/7/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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