No Better Night

the shining stars are all in line
a smiling moon right behind
a better night I couldn't find 
while lovin you is on my mind

so I'll just lay here and relax
with my thoughts so pleasant
enjoy the calm as the sky flows in rhyme
while lovin you is on my mind

before the sun decides to rise
gonna close my eyes just one more time
listen to my heart beat
while lovin you is on my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 18, 2010 at 8:31 PM
a true glimpse into the heart of a man full of love. nothing is more inspiring than the most confusing emotion around. love. and you nailed it with your poem. -joe
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