No Baptisms

I tried to tread inside temples
but I wasn't permitted past the doors-
my reluctant repentance ignored.
I have no need of salvation
because I have been bravely born
into terrible times. This is only one
of my many manifestations of form.

11.22.21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Leffanta Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Interesting how gods and zealots require tests of worthiness whereas unheavenly parents love and accept unconditionally . . . .
Swell Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 11:30 PM
Not all parents unfortunately. I think the only truly unconditional lov vfoundbin this world is in dogs.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 10:07 AM
That is lovely! Thoroughly enjoyed. ~mo
Swell Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 11:31 PM
Thank you!
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