Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Rhyme

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Philippines ballooned and floated over poverty
Population exploded and still exploding molding the humanity
And reached 101,833,938 mortals in the society
With just a matter of 115,830 sq. miles
Approximately 879 Filipinos in every square mile
Really just a wink of an eye rate of mortality growth
As the 55th  poorest nation in the world, CONTROL is a worth
But not through B.C. with RH Bill
Where artificial control of mortality rate spill
" Against the bill, this is just a MESS "
That's all ... Less talk ...Mistake be Less...

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B.C. - birth control

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Kash Poet August 24, 2011 at 8:13 AM Congrats jun-jun on your 2nd place win with this witty write.

Nette Onclaud August 24, 2011 at 1:49 AM whoo, great angle here on our growing population... i think it can't be stopped?? what do people do who live on the railtracks?? and well, the strong staunch of our religion??.. haay naku!.. CHEERS for this unusual piece and congrats, jun..:) hugggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 24, 2011 at 12:12 AM I totally admire your stand with regards to this bill, jun-jun! And I am with you. Passing this bill won't really be the silver bullet for our exploding population...Great message you have here and super congrats on your win! :)

Tahera Mannan August 23, 2011 at 11:24 PM Good one indeed jun-jun. Very apt and deserving. many congrats for this win.

Nancy Jones August 23, 2011 at 6:49 PM sing, sister, sing... let your voice be heard! Beautiful writing on an important topic... namaste. ~N

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 3:48 PM Congrats jun-jun on your special second place win with this eloquent poetry luv.. super..

Carrie Richards August 23, 2011 at 3:34 PM So much information, and such an intelligent way to express this issue! Well done, jun-jun!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 23, 2011 at 2:07 PM Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "AC DC AD BC" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2011 at 1:34 PM Congrats on your win with this informative work..Sara

David Williams August 23, 2011 at 12:20 PM hey jun-jun another cracker, congrats David

Poet Destroyer A August 6, 2011 at 11:29 PM wow! Jun Jun~ this makes lots of interesting sense.. the b.c. ..has me thinking on the birth control.. a deep one in your own way... take care,..p.d. ~~soup mail