Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Nirvana

All the pain and sadness are gone in heaven.
            No frail can still be willed to the realm of god.
Death and old age are gone, and dead are forgiven.
With no strain or strife, it's a cheerful life pod.
                        Spirit may spread its wings to avoid perversity.
Heaven is a haven of perfect peace and harmony.
God, angels, and hosts are with us for eternity.
      It reaps its royal grace, shines as sky's prowess,
            My pleasant, dainty, fancy scarves were endless.
                        Hearts are keen on a super thrilling tenseless.
In a way, both emotion and spirit were driven.
            I kissed the scented sanctum as my feet trod.
      Love with awe and pass on the prayer to posterity,
            Glory nirvana would be apt for a goddess.

Written: February 25, 2023 

This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD

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Beryl Edmonds February 26, 2023 at 7:11 AM Exquisitely lovely Sotto, you’ve followed the Fragmented Rhyme form well. Loved every line! ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar February 26, 2023 at 1:39 AM Brilliant poem. Not easy to use that complicated rhyme scheme. You're a master.

Aysha Nuwas February 25, 2023 at 11:08 PM Very beautiful and well written poem. I particularly loved the line " I kissed the scented sanctum as my feet trod."