Nine Mirrors

square of nine mirrors
admiring his reflection -
the kitten’s labyrinth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 10:18 AM
Very deep, Kim.... an unusual haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 4:44 PM
As always you are much appreciated, Paige! Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:59 PM
Better than the 'Hall of Mirrors' at the Amusement Park!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Awesome! Thank you, Gershon! I hope I find the skinny mirror ;)
Buehler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:59 PM
This is awesome, Kim! I enjoyed it a lot. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Thank you truly, my friend!
Bell Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:28 AM
I would get to the ninth mirror and start again.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:44 AM
And again and again… Well aren’t you clever, Paul!
Bayles Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:40 AM
I like it, especially the last line, a nice twist to your haiku.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Mike! Glad you liked the twist!
Connelly Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Nice imagery. Happy to read the kitten can still see nine lives. Thanks Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:43 AM
Yes! How foolish would humans be with nine lives…
Sharma  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 2:24 AM
Oh wow, such a wonderful wordplay with brilliant crafting! That's a perfect cube poem, love this so much! "Square of nine mirrors" Definitely created the required dimension! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Thank you so much! Love what you see!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:07 AM
Nine reflections, nine lives ... or so they say. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:41 AM
I wonder where the idea came from?
Mcintosh Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:30 AM
Love it. God bless you, Kim. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:41 AM
God bless you too, Gina! Thank you!
Volumes Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:36 PM
Now's there's a cube ! Terrific imagery Kim. The third dimension being an illusion.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:40 AM
Thank you! Great comment!
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