Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

Nimbus

Written: November 18, 2023
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Nimbus, the celestial shroud of the sky
How it floats and twirls proud and elusive
A hazy embrace, a misty cloud sway
Nimbus, the celestial shroud of the sky
Show the cosmos in a mystical way
Not stark immoral nor self-abusive
Nimbus, the celestial shroud of the sky
How it floats and twirls proud and elusive

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William Kelii Kekaula November 20, 2023 at 2:07 PM Nature evoking its naturalness, Lasaad. Suitably addressed, my friend. Aloha, William

Paige Hind November 18, 2023 at 4:17 PM Beautiful! I like your writing of this form.

Ink Empress November 18, 2023 at 7:30 AM Dear sotto, you seem to be an expert in this form triolet, i love how cosmically moving every line is. Flows well too and the way you’ve rhymes is captivating as always. Celestial shroud of the sky and hazy embrace which is a misty cloud away so well depicted. As always it is a pleasure reading your exquisite poetry and the way you phrase thoughts is refreshing. Sending you light always