Nimbus

Written: November 18, 2023 _____________________________________________ Nimbus, the celestial shroud of the sky How it floats and twirls proud and elusive A hazy embrace, a misty cloud sway Nimbus, the celestial shroud of the sky Show the cosmos in a mystical way Not stark immoral nor self-abusive Nimbus, the celestial shroud of the sky How it floats and twirls proud and elusive

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/20/2023 2:07:00 PM

Nature evoking its naturalness, Lasaad. Suitably addressed, my friend. Aloha, William

Paige Hind

Date: 11/18/2023 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful! I like your writing of this form.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 3:25:00 PM

I loved the 'celestial' quality of this Triolet. You've beautifully captured the essence of nimbus clouds, proud and elusive! Those words create such a powerful image in my mind. I also liked 'celestial shroud of the sky." I agree with Ink. You have inspiration skills in creating a Triolet. What else can I say? Awesome job! Enjoy your weekend and Thanksgiving, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 7:30:00 AM

Dear sotto, you seem to be an expert in this form triolet, i love how cosmically moving every line is. Flows well too and the way you’ve rhymes is captivating as always. Celestial shroud of the sky and hazy embrace which is a misty cloud away so well depicted. As always it is a pleasure reading your exquisite poetry and the way you phrase thoughts is refreshing. Sending you light always