Nighttime Dreamer

NIGHTTIME DREAMER
I closed my eyes to catch the wind,
Murmur its way through the green of the field
Hoping somehow in it I'd hear,
You sigh sweetly as you oft do
For your heart on a sleeve you always wore
Even when life taught you to know better.

I hoped to catch you softly whisper
The wind, your harbinger in this silent night
Spreading your tales to the drowsy larks,
Who'll sing them to me at the crack of dawn
Of how another held your golden heart,
And was shallow enough to let it break

How gold thus break?, I wonder,
How a heart like yours can be led astray
For sitting by my window this eerie night,
I think up a thousand feverish words I'd say
To melt a golden treasure, thine heart,
But still I know words don't measure up

So I'll love you through the quiet night,
Daydreaming through the dead of night
As the wind sings to me your flawless name,
The leaves quivering with its every touch
For in this world I can love you free
And be the guardian of your golden heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/24/2018 11:11:00 AM
"For your heart on your sleeve you always wore, even when life taught you better." Yes, these words resonate with me. What a terrific poem!
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:03:00 AM
Thank you Caren. am flattered.
Date: 2/20/2018 9:06:00 AM
What an awesome romantic poem. Exquisite imagery. Superbly done, Aristide.
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:05:00 AM
thanks Gauthier. your comment is a great motivation.
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