Nighttime Crickets Chirp

nighttime crickets chirp in a warm summer evening loudly making call Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2012 5:38:00 PM

You are hearing crickets already?...how many hours away are u?...I only hear cars, birds, dogs in the distance, and an occasional lawnmower or two! ha ha...The moment you isolated in this haiku reminds me of a cricket on his cell phone...a "cricket" customer no less,,,,ha ha,,,sweeet moments here! Enjoyed...Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2012 5:33:00 PM

Haven't started skool yet...had to postpone it for family reasons...I am so pleased for you to be working towards your goals...A bumper sticker I saw this evening on my walk read...If you aren't the lead dog, then you can't be in charge of where you are going! I loved it and tho't of all of my friends who are achieving new endeavors for their lives-just like YOU! love, Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/22/2012 3:44:00 PM

oh my, beautiful word choice ending with a line that awes, russell... well done; i can imagine the scene with mugh delight!..:) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2012 12:07:00 PM

cool haiku take care always p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2012 11:37:00 AM

Yes, there is now a chorus out there at night of Jimminee Crickets..Enjoyed reading your Haiku..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara