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Nightsong

Chirping lilts the air, Cheerful hymns exalt the night: Cricket serenade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2010 5:33:00 AM
enjoyed today, nice start to my morning.
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:41:00 AM
Raul, I enjoyed reading your poetry, today. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts with us. And thank you for your recent comments on my work...and for picking my senryu as a winner. (NOTE. I love cricket sounds. I have written several cricket poems...I love them a lot! This winter, during below freezing weather, I heard the crickets as usual. I thought...Wait a minute...I plugged up my ears...It's all in my head! (A ringing) Its a good thing I enjoy cricket sounds.) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/13/2010 12:02:00 PM
Simply Lovely Ode To Nocturnal Nature ... Haiku In Its Purest Form ...MoonBee
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:07:00 PM
I love crickets chirping...beautiful Haiku...Marty
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Date: 3/12/2010 4:24:00 PM
Captured perfectly in your lines Raul.. and captivating to read too... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:31:00 PM
Yes!!! Here come spring, Raul!! Whew!! And what a relief!!! I love this. Goes to my favs. today. PEace, Audrey
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:37:00 PM
A wonderful Haiku, makes me want to see spring even more. Caryl
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:14:00 PM
Hey Raul!! very beautiful poem, keep sharing
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:05:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Raul. The crickets will soon be out offering their "serenade" as spring approaches! Love, Carolyn
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