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Nightmare Or Dream

First it seems real, then it's not She stands anchored in her spot First excited, then afraid To this place where she has strayed Standing in a field of wheat A dusty trail beneath her feet Fighting back a sense of dread From the farmhouse up ahead A single light to guide her way Should she approach, or run away Indecision clouds her mind To forge ahead, to leave behind Caught between nightmare and dream Nothing is as it may seem Is a fairyland beyond the beam Or will her muse end with a scream
Written for Tracie's "Between Nightmares and Dreams" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/31/2012 2:12:00 AM
There is something with the flow that lured me to your poem, Bob! I love this one! Congratulations on your win, my friend. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment! More power!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/31/2012 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Glenn. I appreciate your comments
Date: 1/30/2012 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations. Well done!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/30/2012 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Christopher
Date: 1/30/2012 11:10:00 AM
Bob, I really liked this one. The rhyme, meter and flow just seemed to work so well for me as I read it. And, I think you caught the essence of the picture really well. Nice job.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/30/2012 1:16:00 PM
Thanks much Joe. I appreciate that.
Date: 1/30/2012 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Between Nightmares and Dreams" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 1/23/2012 10:54:00 PM
Well done here Bob- a champion poem. You really caught the photo well. Much blessings, brenda and thank you for commenting on my poem, Doves eyes : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/24/2012 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Brenda. I hope Tracie agrees with you:)

Book: Shattered Sighs