Nightmare

death comes near in black and red
the pain explodes inside your head 
the devil calls just like he said
you cant excape your fear and dread

you see his face as clear as day
you try to think of what to say
but theres no point any way
he drags you down so all you see
is blackness thats surrounding thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 20, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Yep, that pretty well says it all for those who turn their back on the Lord and His rules and regulations. They fear that He will make them stop having fun. The thing is, if people would only give God a chance they would see that with God there is a whole lot more "get to's" than there are "don'ts". Good write here. God Bless, JB
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December 16, 2011 at 1:17 PM
Very awesome piece!!! Keep up the good work! Always, Laura
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