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Nightmare

The shadows on the wall Form a table saw Like the one in my garage I just want to kiss you But every time I close my eyes I can feel my ribs start to break

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 5:23:00 AM
Terrible nightmare sweet dreams tonight. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 6/18/2009 8:32:00 PM
Wow! Excellent power verses here, with a chilling delivery. Welcome to the soup!
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Date: 6/18/2009 5:39:00 PM
shivers....
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Date: 6/18/2009 3:06:00 PM
My gosh..this is a good write...love how you setup the piece in the first stanza and how you took it home..well done.
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