Nightmare

The shadows on the wall
Form a table saw
Like the one in my garage

I just want to kiss you
But every time I close my eyes
I can feel my ribs start to break
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 5:23 AM
Terrible nightmare sweet dreams tonight. Keep writing. Sara
Bird Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 8:32 PM
Wow! Excellent power verses here, with a chilling delivery. Welcome to the soup!
Joseph Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 5:39 PM
shivers....
Higgins Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 3:06 PM
My gosh..this is a good write...love how you setup the piece in the first stanza and how you took it home..well done.
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