Nightly Tango

Daylight fades out Little insects, they shout It's time for nightly tango Stars come out to play Moon holds centre sway Daylight fades out Velvet sky gleams Dreams dance down on moonbeams Little insects, they shout Darkness slow creeps The whole world sleeps It's time for nightly tango
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 9:21 AM
oh my gosh, I just went back and saw you said almost the exact same thing on my limerick as I said on this poem of yours. So funny!
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 9:20 AM
I really like this one. So clever.
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 3:31 PM
i am impressed by your remarkable pen, Joanna...very creative!
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Hi Joanne, long time, no see! Hope you are doing well. Needless to say, I really like this work and all the imagery that brought light into my soul. Pangie
Buhagiar Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 2:28 AM
Enjoyed this poem and its final line. Great ideas shown.
May Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 5:43 AM
I enjoyed this "nightly tango" Lovely write, was it entered in the contest?
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 9:19 AM
what a charming poem Jo i love the impact of the repeated lines:-) hugs jan xx
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