Nightfall

As the day decays 
Her rays of light defeated 
sun retreats westward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 19, 2013 at 1:41 PM
Ellinor, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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May 10, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Well-written Haiku, Eleonore! Welcome! David
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May 10, 2013 at 3:22 AM
- Lovely Haiku, Sabien! - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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