Night Waves

Black striated clouds interspersed
With red sun and blue
Observed by the morning star's light
Sounds entertain but few  

Fog fluffy pillows dance 'pon pines
Night creatures still sing mirth
Fanbrushed clouds turn cobalt
Wait for day to be birthed

Night waves good bye to day
Whip-Poor-Will's song cease
Soon all of surrounding heat up
Day's journey heat release

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/2/2014 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful Night waves adorned with nice colorful words, enjoyed well. Loved always, my sweet friend,bl
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Date: 7/18/2014 3:31:00 PM
so glad I read this beauty, my friend - boy, this session was so long, but I wanted to read one more of yours
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Date: 7/17/2014 8:54:00 AM
Real pic well painted Sara! Wonderful imagery,, loved ur poem!
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:27:00 AM
I love all of your images here, especially the one of night waving goodbye. A beautiful poem to start my morning.
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:03:00 AM
stunning imagery I will always think of fog fluffy pillows now:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/17/2014 5:53:00 AM
how vivid is your nature song, sara.. so beautiful!.. huggs
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