Russell Sivey Poet Couplet

Night Vs Day

Nocturnal Kiss
Heavenly Bliss

At night we play
At day we lay

Services at night
Respond to light

Nighttime openness
Daylight restfulness

At night romance
At day enhance

The heart lives at night
But the soul exists in daylight

Russell Sivey

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2012 at 9:46 AM When darkness falls on....the romance appears.......Wery good Russell! :) - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich March 16, 2012 at 9:46 PM Hi, Russell, this is very interesting and unique. Your contrast of night and day! I really like that middle couplet, it's almost the opposite of what I think most people might say but to me the nighttime IS more open!! SUre love my nights!!