Night Vent

Awake too soon
awake in the dark
dark too familiar to fear
first foe, now friend
minutes pass like falling snow
time stopped
sun looming
sun lurking
somewhere near
out of sight
passing beneath my feet
circling
circling
great
white
coming at me fast
ready to seize me with the sharp enamel of its rays

I sit
In the dark
Awake 
in the dark
Watching the sleeping wind roll over in its blanket of leaves
But only a moment
nothing really moves
except for the sun
coming at me fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Tellaferro Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Love the Imagery, the word usage, tight and keen. Nice work! Will be reading more!
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