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Night To Day



Night time
Dark hours

Owl hoots
Mouse scoots

Dawns might?
Stops night

Morning
Days birth

Lunch time
Breaks hours

Twilight
Mix drinks

Relax
Get slack

Evening
Start dark
Brians Final Footle contest 9-2-2021
1st Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2021 7:06:00 PM

Great imagery , Jeanne, congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2021 9:58:00 AM

it's wonderful we have these cycles of day to night and season to season!! Congrats, Jeanne, on your win

Joseph May

Date: 7/30/2019 7:38:00 PM

Lovely footle Jeanne..

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/30/2019 6:47:00 PM

This is cute and would be fun to add on to as a group; one footle each about one's day and I bet at the end we'd all either be laughing or totally confused. I said all that because it just came across so darned playful that I wanted to do just that - play! Very cute and frisky ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/30/2019 9:46:00 PM

Jan Allison has done such before. I think people email their contributions and she simply edits her poem to add them then list the contributors at the bottom. BUT that would keep them off the new poem list??, and maybe disallow the reading deserved??? Can you tell I'm not sure, but I think I'm right. Oh, I'm a teeter-totter Libra! Ask Jan, she and Andrea know everything! It would be fun if you had the time to facilitate as Jan does, or makes time for, anyway. Have I confused you enough? Is my work here done?

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/30/2019 7:29:00 PM

oh my goodness! Lets do it!! but how??