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Night Time Thoughts

My mind is like a clear blue summer’s sky And my memories are like clouds rolling by Most they are beautiful, pure and white But when I sleep when I lay down at night Dark clouds build and overwhelm all that’s pure & white, Like a summers storm they gather with menace The wind that drives them is fear & regret And I have-not managed to control either yet So like a storm that is coming, the first drops of rain fall And again I’m caught out in the open And have to weather the storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/24/2014 4:47:00 PM
lovely contrast between daytime and night time great imagery. found the last part very dark Jan x
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