Night Time Sounds

Night time hypnotic music sounds,
Drifting relaxing ebbing flows,
Deep! Deep down falling sleep,
Walking on that tropical beach,
Sun’s hotness shining warmth! 
Crushing sands beneath my feet,
Turning face reaching high,
Breathing in the salty skies,
Seagulls squawking flying by
Children playing babies cry,
Oceans waters swishing swirls,
Barking dogs go running by,
Thoughts of happiness,
Peaceful dreams,
Relaxing in my inner streams,
Strolling into another scene,
Comfortable as I turn and look,
Tick, tick, tick, say five o clock, 
Great relief to have more sleep,
Heavy snoring noises made,
Happy feelings wrapped and warm
Listening to the windy storm,
Night time ends and morning dawns,
Chirping birds to wake me up,
Kettle on to have a cup.


18/06/2016
For contest with Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Alexandropoulou Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 2:44 AM
A nocturnal symphony. While reading it, the sounds come and go like waves upon a shore, too. Great.
Rycroft Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Thank you Archontoul a great comment thank you xxxx
Ball Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Lovely. Some of my very favorite sounds. Great job. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
Rycroft Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Thank you so much Judy xxxx
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:48 PM
so many nocturnal noises Wendy a great poem:-) hugs jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 7:12 AM
Thank you Jan xxx
Haight Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Wonderful beach time sounds to lull you to sleep, Wendy. Your poem is so full of the shore's imagery and the sounds that accompany each one. Best wishes for the contest. ~7~ Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Thank you Sandra xxxx
Roper Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Wendy, this is such a beautiful verse with warm feelings. There is just something about being in the presence of the ocean beach. A heaven of another world's bliss. Hugs Eve
Rycroft Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:03 AM
Hi thank you Eve just changed a couple of repeated words x I don't like repeating myself x
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Lots of awesome night sounds in this one. Very nice!
Rycroft Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:04 AM
Thanks Andrea Just changed some repeating words x
Emu Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Great poem Wendy, a worthy entry in my opinion. Kind Regards, Craig
Rycroft Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Changed some repeating words xxxx
Rycroft Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so much craig nice to meet you Thanks for dropping by x
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