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Night Time Sounds

Night time hypnotic music sounds, Drifting relaxing ebbing flows, Deep! Deep down falling sleep, Walking on that tropical beach, Sun’s hotness shining warmth! Crushing sands beneath my feet, Turning face reaching high, Breathing in the salty skies, Seagulls squawking flying by Children playing babies cry, Oceans waters swishing swirls, Barking dogs go running by, Thoughts of happiness, Peaceful dreams, Relaxing in my inner streams, Strolling into another scene, Comfortable as I turn and look, Tick, tick, tick, say five o clock, Great relief to have more sleep, Heavy snoring noises made, Happy feelings wrapped and warm Listening to the windy storm, Night time ends and morning dawns, Chirping birds to wake me up, Kettle on to have a cup. 18/06/2016 For contest with Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 6/29/2016 2:44:00 AM
A nocturnal symphony. While reading it, the sounds come and go like waves upon a shore, too. Great.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/30/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Archontoul a great comment thank you xxxx
Date: 6/27/2016 6:35:00 PM
Lovely. Some of my very favorite sounds. Great job. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/30/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Judy xxxx
Date: 6/20/2016 3:48:00 PM
so many nocturnal noises Wendy a great poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/21/2016 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Jan xxx
Date: 6/20/2016 9:28:00 AM
Wonderful beach time sounds to lull you to sleep, Wendy. Your poem is so full of the shore's imagery and the sounds that accompany each one. Best wishes for the contest. ~7~ Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/20/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Sandra xxxx
Date: 6/18/2016 8:49:00 PM
Wendy, this is such a beautiful verse with warm feelings. There is just something about being in the presence of the ocean beach. A heaven of another world's bliss. Hugs Eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/19/2016 6:03:00 AM
Hi thank you Eve just changed a couple of repeated words x I don't like repeating myself x
Date: 6/18/2016 8:04:00 PM
Lots of awesome night sounds in this one. Very nice!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/19/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Andrea Just changed some repeating words x
Date: 6/18/2016 6:04:00 PM
Great poem Wendy, a worthy entry in my opinion. Kind Regards, Craig
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/19/2016 6:32:00 AM
Changed some repeating words xxxx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/18/2016 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much craig nice to meet you Thanks for dropping by x

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