Night Time

the moonlight shines here
the winds voice softly repeats
where are you my love?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 5, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Nice use of imagery in the first two lines. They set up the question in the final one. Interesting reflection. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 31, 2009 at 1:33 PM
Soft wanting and longing for your love to be by your side...such a soft beautiful haiku! ~*~Trudy~*~
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