Karen Bathan Poet Rhyme

Night Sky-Lost

I wonder why i cant reach the sky
Why i cant conquer my thoughts
Can i ever complete the missing puzzles?
Under this Starry Sky

The roaring winds wakes me up
It makes my heart shiver
That wind encourage me to rise up
But can i ever win against my fear?

My fear keep engulfing me
Can i maintain my heart pure?
Can i keep living without a doubts?
Can i ever gain a power to conquer my thoughts?

I wish i can be one of the stars
So when the night falls 
I'll light up the sky
A sky where everyone can live without a doubts and fears

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Beata Agustin December 11, 2024 at 9:45 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2016 at 9:33 PM Nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A January 15, 2016 at 9:38 PM Hope to see you post this year.... 2016

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2015 at 2:55 AM Karen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A December 24, 2015 at 1:54 AM Karen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Old Man Emu December 23, 2015 at 10:34 PM Nice poem Karen, keep them coming Cheers Craig

Hansteven Selfa December 23, 2015 at 7:42 AM Great first post! :)