Night Sky Ii

claire de lune/ on the piano/ or in my mind?

Wow, this is so beautiful, Daver. Love the "claire de lune" line and the imagery is great throughout! Love, Carolyn

Daver I like this set, very clever..David

"In the Moon light", you did send me with this great write dear poet ! This write fits in so well with your, "Pikes Peek" Dave ! Awesome write sir ! Have a good night....much love, james

A pleasure to read your poetry today Daver. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Oh, I do love it, the taste, the view and the song. Perfection blended with such a delicate touch but then you know how! :)

The first 3 lines sound romantique...oh lala, qu'est ce que tu fait au "claire de lune"? Love the "moon cheese"!! I'd heard tell it was made of blue cheese! :( Never looks blue to me, how 'bout you?! Yours sounds like a wheel of crustless brie...yum! I've enjoyed your write, Daver! They may be short, but it leaves room for the reader to fill in the spaces with imagination.:) Love you, Mikki

Hi Daver! How are you? I love your night sky, especially enjoyed the moon cheese-- yumm :D! Did you see the super moon? Lovely night sky indeed! Hugs to you, this haiku series made me smile :D