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Night Sky Ii

NIGHT SKY II

night sky
    bottle of wine
        and moon cheese

night sky
    back of the stars
        shiver!

night sky
    off somewhere
        claire de lune

fantasyhaiku

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/11/2012 11:57:00 AM

claire de lune/ on the piano/ or in my mind?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2012 2:22:00 PM

Wow, this is so beautiful, Daver. Love the "claire de lune" line and the imagery is great throughout! Love, Carolyn

David Williams

Date: 5/9/2012 12:15:00 PM

Daver I like this set, very clever..David

James Peranteau

Date: 5/8/2012 5:22:00 PM

"In the Moon light", you did send me with this great write dear poet ! This write fits in so well with your, "Pikes Peek" Dave ! Awesome write sir ! Have a good night....much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/8/2012 12:13:00 PM

A pleasure to read your poetry today Daver. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/8/2012 9:56:00 AM

Oh, I do love it, the taste, the view and the song. Perfection blended with such a delicate touch but then you know how! :)

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/8/2012 9:55:00 AM

The first 3 lines sound romantique...oh lala, qu'est ce que tu fait au "claire de lune"? Love the "moon cheese"!! I'd heard tell it was made of blue cheese! :( Never looks blue to me, how 'bout you?! Yours sounds like a wheel of crustless brie...yum! I've enjoyed your write, Daver! They may be short, but it leaves room for the reader to fill in the spaces with imagination.:) Love you, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 5/8/2012 2:24:00 PM

My poems are short, Mikki, but then I am a little short......daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/8/2012 9:30:00 AM

Hi Daver! How are you? I love your night sky, especially enjoyed the moon cheese-- yumm :D! Did you see the super moon? Lovely night sky indeed! Hugs to you, this haiku series made me smile :D

Night Sky Ii

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