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Night Sky

Holy cow The night sky Is filled with shooting stars, wow Splendid, my reply Honorable display Seeing white specks Flying across the canvas, yay There were no takers on the bets Finally, as I must I depart the darkest sky Leaving a grand memory, just I'll never forget, and I won't cry Russell Sivey

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Judy Ball

Date: 8/18/2011 2:23:00 AM

You should see the Northern Lights. Now that is awe inspiring. Now quick make a wish on one of those stars. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/17/2011 8:51:00 PM

Reminds me that i saw a couple in my lifetime and it was an amazing sight. Love your expressions describing the phenomena.

Don Johnson

Date: 8/16/2011 10:53:00 PM

pretty doggone surely good, flows well too and understood, keep em coming old mate, roll em smartly out the gate, good one mate....Don