Night Sky

Stars dance in the sky
         Wondrous jewels capture night
                       Radiant they shine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Perfect imagery Deb. Now, I'll go wish upon one of those brilliant stars tonight! Thanks for your kind comments.. Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
Muzzey Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 2:05 PM
A wonderfully written Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Chu Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Makes me feel like I've just seen a fantasy movie. Seen Stardust? Though you break some Haiku rules, I still like it.
A   Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 1:20 PM
a sight to see, it really is radient natural beauty, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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