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Night Sky

Stars dance in the sky Wondrous jewels capture night Radiant they shine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/12/2010 2:29:00 PM
Perfect imagery Deb. Now, I'll go wish upon one of those brilliant stars tonight! Thanks for your kind comments.. Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/12/2010 2:05:00 PM
A wonderfully written Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:20:00 PM
Makes me feel like I've just seen a fantasy movie. Seen Stardust? Though you break some Haiku rules, I still like it.
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:20:00 PM
a sight to see, it really is radient natural beauty, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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