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~night Sin~

~          innocent            

~     whiskers in the dark 
~      body of a lioness 
~       sweet devouring

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Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 1:37 AM

sweet

Gerard Keogh Jr.

January 17, 2011 at 1:05 PM

The second line is masterful. You should be proud. This is well done. You seem to have a natural knack for this form. Thanks and regards from Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich

January 15, 2011 at 8:03 AM

IN response to your question, well, your dodoitsu was for the spicy contest, right? and Spicy means sexy, so YES, this is a compliment. Just look at your comments below: Wow, erotic and ravenous, those are meant to imply "sexy!"

Michael J. Falotico

January 15, 2011 at 5:19 AM

wow, this is sooooo goooood!!!! glad I stop by to look through your work...always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2011 at 10:02 PM

wow, sexy like your dodoitsu (whatever thatspicy one's form was called)!

James Marshall Goff

January 14, 2011 at 9:54 PM

again....ravenous good!!!! jimbo

Gert W. Knop

January 9, 2011 at 9:23 AM

Excellent Haiku! Enjoyed the read this early evening!...Gert

Harry Horsman

December 30, 2010 at 6:42 AM

excellent and profound, love this. Harry

David Smalling

December 27, 2010 at 8:01 AM

Very erotic ... you really move this one across the page of imagination

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2010 at 9:42 PM

Makes me think, this one does!! I see you really love your haiku!

Adell Foster

November 22, 2010 at 7:26 AM

This is an excellent haiku, perfect form, powerfully expressed imagery within so few lines, a pleasure to have read for you indeed my friend... Keep that creative pen flowing ;-) Many Blessing, Always, Adell

Carolyn Devonshire

November 20, 2010 at 6:41 AM

Wow! What a fabulous haiku. Very intense and descriptive. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2010 at 4:27 PM

Passionate and raw with beautiful meaning behind your creative lines.. Hathor .. a perfect title to complete the them of your creativity tonight .. appreciate your warm and welcome comments on "BLEEDING" luv... happy weekend..

Poet Destroyer A

November 19, 2010 at 1:52 PM

TRULLY AWESOME,, WHAT MORE CAN I SAY,..P.D.

Michael J. Falotico

November 19, 2010 at 12:27 PM

This is great, and welcome my poet friend to the Soup...always Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta

November 19, 2010 at 12:25 PM

thnx Hathor for visiting my poem, "HE is welcome ever....." and leaving encouraging comments. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta

Wilma Neels

November 19, 2010 at 12:18 PM

A sweet write with sin in it's title.. Loved it Lin Ra ;)

Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2010 at 12:03 PM

Great expressive work..I enjoyed the subtle voice in which you speak..I was delighted that you stopped by my work, read and commented..Glad that you enoyed..Sara