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~Night Sin~

~ innocent ~ whiskers in the dark ~ body of a lioness ~ sweet devouring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 12/11/2013 1:37:00 AM
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:05:00 PM
The second line is masterful. You should be proud. This is well done. You seem to have a natural knack for this form. Thanks and regards from Gerard.
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:03:00 AM
IN response to your question, well, your dodoitsu was for the spicy contest, right? and Spicy means sexy, so YES, this is a compliment. Just look at your comments below: Wow, erotic and ravenous, those are meant to imply "sexy!"
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Date: 1/15/2011 5:19:00 AM
wow, this is sooooo goooood!!!! glad I stop by to look through your work...always Michael
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:02:00 PM
wow, sexy like your dodoitsu (whatever thatspicy one's form was called)!
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:54:00 PM
again....ravenous good!!!! jimbo
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Date: 1/9/2011 9:23:00 AM
Excellent Haiku! Enjoyed the read this early evening!...Gert
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:42:00 AM
excellent and profound, love this. Harry
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:01:00 AM
Very erotic ... you really move this one across the page of imagination
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:42:00 PM
Makes me think, this one does!! I see you really love your haiku!
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:26:00 AM
This is an excellent haiku, perfect form, powerfully expressed imagery within so few lines, a pleasure to have read for you indeed my friend... Keep that creative pen flowing ;-) Many Blessing, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:41:00 AM
Wow! What a fabulous haiku. Very intense and descriptive. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2010 4:27:00 PM
Passionate and raw with beautiful meaning behind your creative lines.. Hathor .. a perfect title to complete the them of your creativity tonight .. appreciate your warm and welcome comments on "BLEEDING" luv... happy weekend..
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:52:00 PM
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Date: 11/19/2010 12:27:00 PM
This is great, and welcome my poet friend to the Soup...always Michael
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Date: 11/19/2010 12:25:00 PM
thnx Hathor for visiting my poem, "HE is welcome ever....." and leaving encouraging comments. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/19/2010 12:18:00 PM
A sweet write with sin in it's title.. Loved it Lin Ra ;)
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Date: 11/19/2010 12:03:00 PM
Great expressive work..I enjoyed the subtle voice in which you speak..I was delighted that you stopped by my work, read and commented..Glad that you enoyed..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:21:00 PM
Nice sweet hunt =(^.^)= Royal
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:27:00 AM
Hater, This is a wonderful Haiku! I so enjoyed reading this today. Thank you for this As Always, Shar
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