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Night Shadows

Shadows flit across the valley shading more and more they are pervading. Changing the shapes of all they touch of the big trees standing tall in a clutch. Creeping along altering as it grows here a scary monster lurks and bows, as branches bend in the gentle wind. Out into the clearing slips the hind. Its size blurred in the dark gloom and startling at the water spume As it soars up briefly from the stream churning the water high lighting the beam. As dawn high lights the sky, they fade returning to normal, to dark farewell they bade. Mysteries of night now sleep til dark returns resting hiding under the lush green ferns.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 2:19:00 PM
SHADOW, NICE WIN..... SKAT
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Date: 12/15/2015 9:45:00 PM
Hello Shadow, Miss you, So happy to have you on the top of my winning list. ;) Congratulations on your sweet and wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "You're Still Out There" if you'd like. Enjoy the Holidays and Thank you for supporting my contest. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/14/2015 2:20:00 AM
Enjoyed the flow, very spirited. Thanks!
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:56:00 PM
Very pretty, Shadow - an enjoyable shadow tale ... CayCay
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Date: 11/4/2015 7:05:00 AM
Nice write, Shadow. Thinking about your contest.
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Date: 11/1/2015 12:57:00 PM
I like this poem ..it flows well, the word choices are excellent, and the theme is consistent throughout. Emile.
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:06:00 AM
A chilling example of what you are seeking in your contest. I hope I can come up with something Shadow. Your poem is awesome!
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Date: 10/31/2015 8:48:00 AM
Wonderful night walk with all the shadowy movements of the glimmer reflections of the moon! Love it! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/31/2015 1:53:00 AM
"Lush green ferns" - what lovely imagery!
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Date: 10/28/2015 1:55:00 AM
Beautiful, deer do just slip out into the open from the forest. It's almost magical to watch on clear night.
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Date: 10/27/2015 7:44:00 AM
Lovely rhyming, thoughts put to words so beautifully Shadow! Super 7 !
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