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Night Serenade

fragments of stardust an impression of romance cosmos within mind Indonesia, July 5th 2021 04.29am #my1sthaikuinthisyear #itfeelsnicetowriteagain

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Justin Bordner

Date: 9/21/2021 10:36:00 PM

The body of mind knows the touch of stellar glow...J.A.B.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/18/2021 5:37:00 PM

Wow Shirley! Line 3 allows the reader imaginative freedom, well done!

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/22/2021 12:59:00 PM

Thank you for leaving a sweet trace on this one James.. ~hug

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2021 6:05:00 AM

I like this modern Haiku. Reminds me of romance. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/9/2021 5:03:00 AM

Thanks for droppin by and leave sweet comment for me, Sara :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2021 10:22:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Shirley :) - Welcome back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/6/2021 10:06:00 PM

Anneee..! oh i'm so happy that i still found u here..i wish Linda and the other still around too tbh..

Chris Green

Date: 7/5/2021 11:27:00 AM

Beautifully expressed. This reads so softly. As if written in a whisper.

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/5/2021 10:25:00 PM

Thank you for yor sweet comment, Chris.. really appreciate it.. :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/4/2021 7:21:00 PM

Shirley worth a glimpse!

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/4/2021 7:42:00 PM

Thanks for the sweet words, Rico.. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2021 2:38:00 PM

simply beautiful Shirley:-) hugs Jan xx

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/4/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thank u for the warm comment, Jan.. xx :)