Night Owls

Their covenant wings Like cherubim on alters Spread out for preying

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:32:00 PM

LEON,, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2012 5:11:00 AM

((()))((()))Clap! Clap!..Congrats on your big placement..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2012 6:16:00 PM

interesting short verse! congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/11/2012 1:44:00 PM

That last line sure is a witty word play! Congrats, Leon! :D

John Freeman

Date: 1/11/2012 9:23:00 AM

Leon, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2012 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Leon. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/11/2012 2:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2012 9:16:00 PM

COOL word play on that final line. Congrats on your win, Leon!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/10/2012 6:06:00 PM

congrats on your Haiku words ;} very nice !

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Leon. Love, Carol

Justin Hensley

Date: 11/20/2010 10:08:00 PM

Very beauitiful poem you have penned.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2010 11:15:00 AM

i'm so into 'kus as well, leon! a flowing, fluid piece with great tonality.. should you wish to visit my page on " pensee.." which i introduced here, it's a form that is quite like haiku.. hope you'll do one as well..warmest, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2010 10:58:00 AM

a nice haiku that' could actually make me visualize the preying,, enjoyed your write Leon,,.p.d.