Night Owls

Their covenant wings
Like cherubim on alters
Spread out for preying

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Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 1:32 PM

LEON,, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Sara Kendrick

January 23, 2012 at 5:11 AM

((()))((()))Clap! Clap!..Congrats on your big placement..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

January 12, 2012 at 6:16 PM

interesting short verse! congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 11, 2012 at 1:44 PM

That last line sure is a witty word play! Congrats, Leon! :D

John Freeman

January 11, 2012 at 9:23 AM

Leon, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 11, 2012 at 5:20 AM

Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Leon. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 11, 2012 at 2:27 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win x

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2012 at 9:16 PM

COOL word play on that final line. Congrats on your win, Leon!

Debbie Duncan

January 10, 2012 at 6:06 PM

congrats on your Haiku words ;} very nice !

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 4, 2012 at 1:04 PM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Leon. Love, Carol

Justin Hensley

November 20, 2010 at 10:08 PM

Very beauitiful poem you have penned.

Nette Onclaud

November 20, 2010 at 11:15 AM

i'm so into 'kus as well, leon! a flowing, fluid piece with great tonality.. should you wish to visit my page on " pensee.." which i introduced here, it's a form that is quite like haiku.. hope you'll do one as well..warmest, nette