Night Out On the Ocean
If luck was balance and hair was thin then one would be electrifying,
Like a night taken from a eclipse every moment cut from a scene,
The way the trees hold balance the smell of the salt of a breezy,
Hold of a key that press against the skin how precious such a steel,
The bit of apple and juice that surrender to the crest of lips,
Refreshing indeed key west any one?,
If luck was balance and hair was thin then one would be electrifying,
One beauty is like a night out on exotic location,
If our love was a island which island would be,
If luck was balance and hair was thin then one would be electrifying.
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