Night On the Water

Here is a story
Here is the truth
I'm ready to go
To let loose
This is the feeling
That you cant choose

My heart is racing
And I feel her touch 
I wonder if my heart 
Can handle this much

The last night 
We met
Was the last night 
We kissed
Now here it goes 
Are you ready for this 

My hearts beating strong
And its getting fast
I finally locked
The door to my past

One more thing 
That her kiss 
Does bring
Its like a beat
Sort of a ding
Its that one two three
That makes your heart sing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 16, 2009 at 12:33 AM
Loved the second stanza...Welcome to Poetry Soup...Raul
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