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Night of a Fallen Sky

As the night foster, sank my fragile heart, Because the frivolous moon began to play with my thoughts, As gleam the the moon up high , heart began to go in deep, Thinking of many butterflies that come to me and left , And of cemetery I went with flowers , bestowed, With gangrene and extinguish bodies which once glowed, The chain of thought broke , with a marvelous sight, Once dead sun again stood for fight ! The sun rose for them , who burn and got too far, Still night for them, who let exodus the stars!

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Date: 7/17/2021 7:45:00 AM
nice poem
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Date: 7/16/2021 12:28:00 PM
Dear Alok, I liked the line the "frivolous moon", enjoyed this poem. Keep writing.
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:35:00 AM
Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Alok Yadav
Date: 7/10/2021 10:00:00 PM
And please see my other poem also. And give me some tips please because I am a beginner and I am in class 8
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Alok Yadav
Date: 7/10/2021 9:52:00 PM
Thanks , I am glad that a poet like you praised my poetry

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