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Night Music

Crickets crescendo,
Symphony under the stars.
Rain storm finale.

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Rhia Madison Thomer

October 14, 2009 at 7:46 PM

in simple lines something beautiful is created. this is wonderful. madison

Doris Culverhouse

October 12, 2009 at 4:05 PM

nicely penned, Jimmy said you are the one helping him, you are a good friend.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

October 12, 2009 at 2:39 PM

Awesome! I can hear the music. Great Haiku. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 12, 2009 at 4:50 AM

You are doing very well in the writing of Haiku Martin. Why not try a Monoku? Wishing you the best. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 11, 2009 at 9:44 PM

I really liked your last line, really rounded your haiku well :) the rainstorm does indeed bring out the symphony in nature

Doris Culverhouse

October 11, 2009 at 7:07 PM

nicely penned, ihear those crickets, we got a storm last night

Gert W. Knop

October 11, 2009 at 3:19 PM

I well rememeber the night-concerto of crickets back in the Papua New Guinea highlands in the 1990ties. Enjoyed this haiku very much, Marty and thanks for your comments. Gert