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Night Music

Crickets crescendo, Symphony under the stars. Rain storm finale.

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 10/14/2009 7:46:00 PM

in simple lines something beautiful is created. this is wonderful. madison

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/12/2009 4:05:00 PM

nicely penned, Jimmy said you are the one helping him, you are a good friend.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/12/2009 2:39:00 PM

Awesome! I can hear the music. Great Haiku. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2009 4:50:00 AM

You are doing very well in the writing of Haiku Martin. Why not try a Monoku? Wishing you the best. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/11/2009 9:44:00 PM

I really liked your last line, really rounded your haiku well :) the rainstorm does indeed bring out the symphony in nature

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/11/2009 7:07:00 PM

nicely penned, ihear those crickets, we got a storm last night

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/11/2009 3:19:00 PM

I well rememeber the night-concerto of crickets back in the Papua New Guinea highlands in the 1990ties. Enjoyed this haiku very much, Marty and thanks for your comments. Gert

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/11/2009 2:54:00 PM

I can smell the sweetness of the earth ofter the storm, well done. ~Trudy~

Leon Wilson

Date: 10/11/2009 2:23:00 PM

Love this Haiku it reminds me of when we were in Portugal. We want to go back. Well done Martin. God Bless. Leon

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/11/2009 1:39:00 PM

Excellent haiku, love the finale...Raul