Night Moves

daylight makes me plain
    black of night is where I bloom...
        dreams and destiny


written 1/12/2014

darkdreamnightsenryu

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Skat A

February 26, 2014 at 8:55 PM

Deb, deep senryu, , Congratulations!! Luv ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton

February 21, 2014 at 11:39 AM

lovely imagery Deb congrats on win hugs

Sara Kendrick

February 21, 2014 at 10:20 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 21, 2014 at 4:18 AM

Lovely imagery penned and congrats on the win, deb

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2014 at 10:23 PM

very nice one, deb. Congrats for your win. How are you doing?

Connie Gildersleeve

February 20, 2014 at 7:39 PM

Deb nicely expressed. Congratulations on your win. Connie

Daver Austin

January 19, 2014 at 10:45 AM

Super, Deb. I love the short form and this is unusually fine. "Black of night is where I bloom" Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

January 13, 2014 at 10:34 AM

mystique of night in bloom, deb...lovely senryu~..huggs

Nette Onclaud

January 13, 2014 at 10:33 AM

mystique of night in bloom, deb...lovely senryu~..huggs

Russell Sivey

January 13, 2014 at 12:26 AM

This write is such a beautiful write my friend! Wow, I really loved the thought of your poem, the aura is extraordinary! I really enjoyed reading this fascinating piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great work!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 12, 2014 at 9:07 PM

Beautiful thought well penned, Deb

Night Moves

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