Night Moves

daylight makes me plain black of night is where I bloom... dreams and destiny written 1/12/2014

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2014 8:55:00 PM

Deb, deep senryu, , Congratulations!! Luv ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 11:39:00 AM

lovely imagery Deb congrats on win hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2014 10:20:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2014 4:18:00 AM

Lovely imagery penned and congrats on the win, deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2014 10:23:00 PM

very nice one, deb. Congrats for your win. How are you doing?

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/20/2014 7:39:00 PM

Deb nicely expressed. Congratulations on your win. Connie

Daver Austin

Date: 1/19/2014 10:45:00 AM

Super, Deb. I love the short form and this is unusually fine. "Black of night is where I bloom" Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2014 10:34:00 AM

mystique of night in bloom, deb...lovely senryu~..huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2014 10:33:00 AM

mystique of night in bloom, deb...lovely senryu~..huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/13/2014 12:26:00 AM

This write is such a beautiful write my friend! Wow, I really loved the thought of your poem, the aura is extraordinary! I really enjoyed reading this fascinating piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great work!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 9:07:00 PM

Beautiful thought well penned, Deb