Night Moon

When I look up into the high heavens The night envelopes me in And the moon looks over
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Enjoyed dreaming with you..Those nights with moons and stars are so inviting..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for the warm comment about my work..Yes, we are having up and down spring type weather..The Daffodils, Forsythia, Japanese Magnolia, Star Magnolia, some Pears, and now the Red Buds are blooming..My allergy is acting up like the Pine Trees are blooming..Sara
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February 25, 2012 at 4:38 PM
You paint a picture with colorful words and scenes, russell... amazing write!.. fixed my 20/20; did 2 drafts and posted the 15-liner, lol.. done!...thanks with winning huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 10:26 AM
wow a most delightful scenario Russell and quite captivating too.. that golden Moon seems to have a prominent affect on all who gaze upon it's orb luv.. good luck if for any contst ..
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February 24, 2012 at 11:52 PM
I LOVE IT! I think you have just inspired me to write a YIN to this YAN...I shall call it "DAY MOON"...As I sat out by the pool the other day (I live in Florida) the moon kept peering beyond the clouds during the 3 pm Sun....Then, get this My SON's swim shorts kept falling down revealing his tiny Moon of a behind. I swear, the moment was Ironically surreal! You can't make this stuff up. Ya' gotta trust me Russ! Indeed, I love your little precious poem!~JSL
Johnson Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 11:00 PM
bathed in darkness, but does the night intrude... love it Russell mate...
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Very nice, Russell. Is there a kimo contest going on? I have not even looked at contests yet for the night. If you had just two more words, this would be GREAT for the 20/20 contest!!!
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February 24, 2012 at 6:27 PM
It is ah moment Russell- lovely, Bren : )
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