"night Kisses"

Your kisses goodnight
                    hold a flame in my heart strong
                                                through night till morning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 8:14 PM
on the 4th day of x-mass my true love gave to me...4 kissing songs.. 3 old pens.. 2 cradles of love ... and a warm place in his arms and fair tree....
Neshat Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 3:02 AM
very romantic, feeling well put togather.
Anish Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Nice senryu! I would have changed "hold a flame: to "keep the flame". Thanks for your comment. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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October 30, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Very romantic Michael!Celene.
Devonshire Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 4:57 AM
Ah, great passion in this poem, Michael. Isn't it wonderful to have someone who keeps the flame in your heart burning? Well done! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Needed more Night Kisses to begin my weekend of kisses .. after all its Halloween and freakiness is in bloom..hahaha..
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Lovely, Michael. Nice seeing you today. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Very sensuous feelings of kisses through night till morning, Michael
Wilson Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 5:24 PM
this is just beautiful Michael..take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 5:07 PM
lovely senryu
Sweetheart Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 4:17 PM
Over the bridge .. and as close as our thoughts luv.. remember that... watching the game tonight?
Sweetheart Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Sounds like a romantic plan in place my W.K. .. and your Jersey Girl fully approves .. such a wonderful Senryu ... with luv..forever..
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October 28, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Very passionate my friend..I am glad that I read this love message this eve..I was lifted up by your comments on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Keep the gifted pen flowing...Sara
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