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Night Fantasies

I see moon-leaves on trees Your cascade of hair too I see passion in a blue spree Waiting for me and you And I say to myself in wonder What a moonlight splendor I look at starlit mystic sky Sprinkling love in your eye So very close to me Exciting the lips of my sea Purple dreams everywhere I say to myself in wonder How beautiful you are Golden silence of moon In your look a lagoon I will write a poem on you You on me And we both of us will be In our moon beam destiny On me and you Moonlit dew Asking us to say I love you I say to myself in wonder In your touch my harbour Now let us go to the boat In our moonlit coat We two will be one Except the moon none Will paint our passion plunder I say to myself in wonder What a moment to surrender Our joyous existence In a pink to each other And to our heart’s content Drink the unique nectar Of our merger together I say to myself in wonder What a fusion fire here In the moony infinity We will feel and see The intensity of our deep night In the clashes And the consequent flashes Of ecstasy That shakes the gravity Into a sudden full empty I say to myself in wonder What an ocean we are _____________________________ 18/12/2016

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Date: 12/26/2016 1:57:00 AM
Great content, great rhyme and great meaning. Congratulations
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2016 4:48:00 AM
I appreciate your comments and feel honoured ...
Date: 12/22/2016 11:33:00 PM
Congrats!!! my dear friend...job well done...Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays...god bless...^WW^
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 5:45:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/22/2016 10:30:00 PM
The descriptions are amazing and so pleasing. It exudes such a soothing sensation. A 7 & a fav. Congratulations, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 5:45:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/22/2016 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lovely images of the night.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/22/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/20/2016 1:39:00 PM
Probir, I am enchanted, enthralled and enraptured with your lacy brevity so full of love and passion. I sigh and feel the delight your poem rolls through me. CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 11:00:00 PM
Ah, you say so beautifully CayCay ... as if Jasmines in the month of May ...I am glad that this silken moon you enjoy ...
Date: 12/19/2016 9:00:00 AM
A lovely passionate piece Probir. I hope this does well in the contest. Happy holidays to you and yours my friend! 7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Connie ...
Date: 12/18/2016 4:34:00 PM
Beautiful love poem. moonlit coat. was killer. :) sweet write..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/18/2016 1:59:00 PM
I am amused and left in wonder. The last two lines summarize man's destiny. Well done, Gupta. Solomon Ochwo Oburu
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 5:40:00 AM
Thank you ...