Night Fall

Seeking a rhythm in which
to find words to stitch

together a rhyme of sense ...
And so, remaining intense

in a desire to tell a story
poetic in all its glory,

the wheels of this brain
creak with great strain ...

As no answers are given,
its best to stop being so driven,

and give up on writing bright
at least for tonight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Norvell Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 9:43 PM
I love this it put you in the right place. good work and thanks for your comment.
Chamma Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 8:05 AM
That's a wonderful write Sue...It is smooth and makes the reader smile...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah
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