Night Dreamer-Rhymed Senryu


 

         


                Furry cat, so soft.
                Purring, and more on than off.
                Across me, aloft.
 
         



                         1/21/2021
                            ~2~
 
 
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Hinshaw Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 11:35 AM
The most elegant critter God did design; Is the inscrutable but companionable feline! Great tribute to your pal Irene, Pangie - Bob
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Super- duper couplet....that, they are Bob! Irene waves a thank you. Passing out shortly. Talk tomorrow! Pangie
Buhagiar Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 9:21 AM
You must love your cat very much. ~~
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:20 PM
Dont know how I would survive close to a year lockdown without her. Victor...I always have has cats. Twenty, so far! Thank you for two visits today~ very sweet. Pangie
Michael Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:24 AM
I can certainly see that dreamy cat...
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Arturo...I must Post her photo one day. I mention her in so many poems... You should be with her! . She is really magical Pangie
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:37 AM
She should be posted online, so my friends here can see her. Wonderful to see you.. Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:54 AM
I can just picture the scene Pangie, Irene sounds like shes very content. Tom
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:35 AM
So glad you can see it....lately, I have become her bed.)) And she knows when I am upset, cuddling my face with her paws. Wonderful...thank you Tom. Pangie
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