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Night Comes Around

night comes around for the freak run around in the dead of night for there's no need to scream, for the freak like the taste of your blood . oh the moonlight makes me come alive, for the rain keeps falling down to the sound of you tears fire's will burn our love will turn the night walker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 5:56:00 PM
LUV oh the moonlight makes me come alive.. lines is superb Duncan.. enjoyed the flow of this one my friend.. a certain flair envelopes your lines of poetry..luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:53:00 AM
Your words grab the reader..nicely done
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:52:00 AM
Interesting indeed, Duncan! Thank you for sharing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:49:00 AM
Interesting work..Sara
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:24:00 PM
you have began a series for sure that is creative and much more,,,Blessings..Cecil
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