Night Comes

Softly and sadly
Up on the knoll;
The vesper bell
Begins to toll.

Lock all the doors
Blow out the light;
The hour is late
Sleep comes with the night.

Close all the windows
Smother the fire;
Sound slips into silence
When mortals retire.

Downstairs is deserted
No one in the hall
Nirvana of sleep
Rules over all.

A day's work completed
Now done like the day;
Rest is now needed
For those made of clay.

How soft is the night
Where dark shadows fall;
The seduction of sleep
Captures us all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kapoor Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 10:43 AM
What a great gem of a poem I could see only to day dear friend Elizabeth. We all miss you a lot. How nice it would be if I find some day your new poem on your page to enjoy once again the wealth of beauty which flows like a wonderful river in all your poems. Missed you a lot.....Ravindra K Kapoor
Walker Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 12:13 PM
I really enjoyed this creation, the use of words and the flow are wonderful. :-)
Ogbonna Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 6:53 PM
I really loved reading this poem. Fine choice of language. Keep it up Elizabeth.
Zozulya Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 5:46 PM
GREAT POEM)
Kithinji Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 5:54 AM
To be or not to be Asked the bee To see or not to see Replied the sea
Komala Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Hi dearest sista Elize.. how are you.. am coming by to wish you a very happy Easter .. and i enjoyed so much this piece.. very beautifully written <3 :) much luv and big hugs <3 Sk
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March 10, 2013 at 9:33 AM
I know nothing that could be added to call this poem perfect. It grabbed me and sent beautiful vibes searching for my soul.... You are terrific..... Jake
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January 1, 2013 at 3:19 AM
Beautiful poetry as usual. I always love reading your verse. Your words speak from your soul. Thank you for your kind words re my poem. I haven't been on this site for a very long time. Have published 5 books and only going to do one more. After that, am rewriting a self help book on "Power" and continuing to give lectures. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas, and I wish you a fabulous 2013. Luv, Maureen x
Duncan Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 10:04 PM
Great,,,, I love it ;}
Guzzi Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Nothing beats a good nights sleep..[you know I do not think I write good haiku ;) I just think they now ARE haiku ;)..that's as far as I feel I have gotten] Light & Love
Komala Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:34 AM
my dear sweet Elize,,,thank you for your visit apprecaite so much your beautiful verse.. may all the beautiful days be yours ever <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) SK
West Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 5:39 PM
Wow, what a great write and read Elizabeth. Enjoyed reading it this evening. Rollo
Komala Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 8:54 AM
hi dearest Elize,,beautiful piece of yours ..delighted my night,,,enjoyed so much reading this tonight...:) <3<3<3 have a fabulous days :)
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 6:41 PM
A sweet write Elizabeth! Light & Love
Horn Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 1:00 PM
Where is Elizabeth Wesley? Many poets in Poetry Soup seemed to have drifted of into space. They must be somewhere. Jim Horn
Inka Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 12:52 AM
Rhyme is my favorite too, and you do it so well. Thank you
Babcock Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Beautifully written, lovely rhyme is your poem. Time is short so quickly trying to comment on a few today. love phyl
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November 29, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Terrific write Elizabeth. Hugs
Lewis Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 1:49 AM
very nice. well done.
Austin Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 2:17 PM
There is a sense of foreboding here that makes sleep escape that much more comforting. As I grow older the mystery and foreboding of the night, of the lack of light becomes stronger. As usual, Liz, you are something else. Love, daver
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November 25, 2012 at 2:20 PM
A beautifully delivered poem! You are awesome Elizabeth! Thank you for sharing.
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November 25, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Beautiful words, beautiful images, beautiful poem... Terry
Kearley Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Opps! I thought I commented on this write already? Good thing I decided to come back to read your fine works.Because of course I can't stay away... :o)
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November 19, 2012 at 12:55 AM
No one is permanent, every one is to go, so seduction of sleep will capture all one by one. It's universal poem. I think that the days which are passing now should be enjoyed with this wonderful world. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
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November 17, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Lizzie that is a darn good poem and my husband and I were just talking about how lots of poets have trouble sleeping at night. Must be the mind that doesn't want to shut down. Anyway a jem of a poem. love phyl
May Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Hi Elizabeth... If you look under "Community" you will see they added the Top 100 poems.....best wishes
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