Night Bite

Angler
Jitters the bug
Atop the placid pond
The darkness obscures his stalk
The strike!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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September 6, 2008 at 8:03 AM
I hope you're doing great, Joe...having your fill of fishing fun! :) The kids don't fish as much any more, but I have many pictures of the ones that didn't get away.(the ones that did were always the bigger ones? :) Maybe they were just smarter, or more lucky. I hope you're doing well and enjoying your summer...wishing you the best..Mikki
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