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The lamp post is lit


Bugs flutter towards the light


The cat waits to pounce

The lamp post is lit Bugs flutter towards the light The cat waits to pounce First try at Haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/1/2012 3:23:00 PM
Patrick.....I am enchanted by your HAIKU POEM..... it has given me the encouragement to write some myself. Thank you. Louis Drago
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Date: 6/3/2012 9:23:00 AM
Excellent job. Are you sure you haven't written a haiku before? This one's finely tuned. Kathy
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Date: 6/3/2012 10:04:00 AM
LOL Kathy.. I read how to do it and just tried...
Date: 6/1/2012 1:19:00 PM
Not a bad first haiku. Keep writing them.
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