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The lamp post is lit

Bugs flutter towards the light

The cat waits to pounce

Night

The lamp post is lit


                                    Bugs flutter towards the light


                                      The cat waits to pounce






First try at Haiku

Copyright © Patrick Cornwall | Year Posted 2012

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August 1, 2012 at 3:23 PM

Patrick.....I am enchanted by your HAIKU POEM..... it has given me the encouragement to write some myself. Thank you. Louis Drago

Kathryn Collins

June 3, 2012 at 9:23 AM

Excellent job. Are you sure you haven't written a haiku before? This one's finely tuned. Kathy

Patrick Cornwall

June 3, 2012 at 10:04 AM

LOL Kathy.. I read how to do it and just tried...

June 1, 2012 at 1:19 PM

Not a bad first haiku. Keep writing them.

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