Night

Night has fallen fast No single sound enters my room My mind is drifting

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2010 8:23:00 AM

LOve this. yes, about poetry in the romance languages. But do you think any of them can compare to our number of rhyming words? hahaha

Skat A

Date: 3/2/2010 5:31:00 PM

pondering the mind... good write

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/2/2010 5:09:00 AM

drifting on the evening, I like it!

Skat A

Date: 3/1/2010 11:12:00 AM

Impressive write, enjoyed reading your poem today..

Susan Palli

Date: 3/1/2010 10:10:00 AM

excellent! Thanks for the info. I loved to learn.

Sue Mason

Date: 2/27/2010 7:25:00 PM

Wonderful use of the form here, Gert !! Thanks for your recent comments. Would love to hear more about life at the kibbutz !! Its a part of the world I've always wanted to visit but probably more like it was 25 years ago than now ... the wall makes me sad ...

David Byrne

Date: 2/21/2010 7:39:00 PM

Know the feeling!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2010 5:00:00 PM

That would be a really unusual night for there to be no sound for I always hear birds, wind chimes, appliances running noise, wind, cars, wild dogs,etc. My mind can drift even in all that going on around here but usually drifts to sleep. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/21/2010 3:20:00 PM

It seems Night bring rest and restlesness ,I wonder if your mind was drifiting in sleeo or in thought? When i was young i was so afraid of the night..then dad did a little dim light in my room,I used to look at that light. when my mind drifted in children's scary thoughts.think of morning and sleep..Night can be hard,yet if we dream it can be serene..Wishing you a Good Safe Night..Charma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2010 2:08:00 PM

enjoyed reading, thanks for the info on the cats, i have seen some on tv but have not been to a live show. Sounds interesting.